Owls and Orchids

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Falling Softly

Like spring raindrops

Slowly trickling

Ever downwards

To the faint beat

The pulse of life

Always with gentle heat

The beat that’s all life

Slowly etched

In widening caverns

Like Tears of Acid Rain

Dreams unspoken

Love gave no token

By growing isolation

Rejection

Raindrops of blood

Acid etched by sorrow

Never more tomorrow

Alone

Tears of Acid Rain

image from bleeding_eye_by_flauschvampire91

Ciao, Susan

© Susan Jamieson 2013

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Posted in Depression, Identity, Life, Philosophy, Poetry, Psychology, Spirituality, Uncategorized | Tagged Acid rain, BEing present, Friendship, grief, happiness, Literature, Living from the heart, memories, pain, Relationships, sadness, Spirituality, Susan Jamieson | 7 Comments

7 Responses

1. on November 24, 2013 at 7:57 pm | Reply Ann Koplow

   Amazing post, Susan. Thanks.

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2. on November 24, 2013 at 8:48 pm | Reply laurie27wsmith

   I do like that.
   Laurie.xox

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   • on November 25, 2013 at 4:50 pm | Reply Owls and Orchids

     Been hanging onto it for some reason… seemed like it was the right time. Thanks Laurie. Susan x

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     • on November 25, 2013 at 8:37 pm laurie27wsmith

       🙂

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3. on November 24, 2013 at 11:09 pm | Reply rayj2012

   Touches the heart, as only can be done by one who has been there!
   Ray xxx

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4. on November 25, 2013 at 12:57 am | Reply betterphotos4you

   Very well written, I was touched on my heart -so nice 🙂

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   • on November 25, 2013 at 4:59 pm | Reply Owls and Orchids

     Thank you- I appreciate your comment. Susan x

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